No Eyes Chapter 1

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This is my first story I ever wrote, I'm trying to improve my writing skills. So if you really like creepy and scary stories here's one for you, Well, I don't really know if it's scary or not, it's mostly about finding friends and caring for someone, This is just about a girl who's homeless and she can't find any friends that would talk with her, So she finds a lonely boy with no eyes. Yeah, I know it's kinda creepy but anyways I hope you guys like it! Oh, and by the way I named the girl Ashley, I couldn't find any names so that name came into my head. I'm probably going to think a name for the boy with no eyes.

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Ashley's POV:

Why is everyone so different?
Why does everyone try to hurt me?
Why do I feel so lonely?
Why does everyone laugh at me?
Why won't anyone like me?
There was a few questions I thought to myself constantly..

I laid on a tree branch, thinking about how stupid I was
I couldn't just lay there all day..
I got up, and went to talk with the girls
I didn't wanted to talk neither move, But I thought it was for my own good, I was just standing there like a stupid listening to what people said...so I started walking slowly towards them, until they saw me.
" Hello girls, w-want to play truth or dare with m-me?" I smiled nervously.
" Oh, look who came to join the conversation it's our little ugly friend Ash" One of the girls in the group said.
Ashley got closer " M-My n-names is n-not A-Ash, I just w-wanted to p-play truth o-or dare" Ashley said shyly.
" Haha, don't be stupid!! Anyways, we don't want you here cuz you stink!! Why would anyone want to play with you?! You sleep in a tree, you don't even shower!" She got closer to me and she pushed me "Get out of my way you rat!!" She yelled at me. I fell so hard I broke my right ankle. I couldn't really get up I was laying on the grass all bleeding.
" Ow, my ankle!!" tears started to fall down my face.
" Aww, your poor little ankle..HAHA!!!" She spit saliva on the clothes and she left back home.
Ashley's POV:

I got up slowly, I got one of the leaves from the tree and wrapped on my ankle I covered it with honey so it can stay glued. It started to rain really hard the clouds grew darker and darker and the air became faded grey, I saw that a storm as coming so I started running as fast as I can to find shelter. Suddenly, I found this brown old cabin, I opened the door and got in. Once I got in, I saw many furniture, I saw a small TV, and an old white couch, I decided that I should stay here until the rain stops, so I turned on the TV and watched cartoons with the volume low I layed on the white soft couch and closed my eyes and I suddenly began to fall asleep. But then, I heard a noise coming from a room, It had scared me so I got up and I decided to see it who was. It sounded like if someone was crying. I got closer to the door and opened the door handle, I stepped into the room quietly. As I got in I could see a boy, he had short red hair, like mines. He had his back at me, and he was sitting by the window crying. "Poor Boy" I thought to myself. What I didn't realise, I thought out loud, that within a second, he turned around and looked at me...That he didn't have any eyes, just dark empty holes. I grew in surprise And I was absolutely terrified I decided to to leave the room so I grabbed the door handle.

" Don't go yet" His voice sounded really nice He pointed a chair that was beside him.
He clearly wanted me to sit down, stupidly I did.
" Hello" I said silently 
" Why did you come into my room?" He said.
" I was sleeping and I heard you cry..I don't like it when people cry" I said.
" Why do you care if I cry, lots of people don't" he said.
" I'm not like the others" I said.
" Neither am I" he said
" Why we're you crying?" I said
" I wanted someone like you to hear me, so you can come and talk with me" he said
" So you don't have any friends?" I said
" No, sadly I don't" he said
" So, your not upset?" I said
" No not at all, I just wanted someone to stay here with me" he said quietly
" Stay?" I asked worriedly
" Oh yes, stay here with me..forever" he smiled
" Forever!?" I yelled.
" Of course, you'll never leave this room you have to stay here with me" he said.
" But-I-I really h-have t-to go" I said shyly
" You know, I can really rip your eyes out!" He yelled
" Please don't" I asked.
" Then stay here" he said 
" Oh, I almost forgot! I forgot to turn off the TV..oh silly me, I'll see you in a bit" I got up quietly and starting walking towards the door.
" Get back here, RIGHT NOW!" He yelled.
" No, I can't!" I ran up to the door and slammed it behind me.
I went into another room that was next to his and I laid on a bed. I stared at the ceiling..and fell asleep. Everything was so peaceful and silent, until about 5 minutes ago, I could hear him speaking.
" Why did you leave me? I really like you" 
He was crying again..
" Come back, please? I need you here with me, I feel so lonely without you" 

NEXT CHAPTER COMING SOON...bye I love you!! I hope you guys liked it! :) LOL I ONLY MADE LIKE ONE MISTAKE IN THIS STORY xD

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Klover-Masquerade's avatar
It sounds sad and FREAKING CREEPY